Shack Is Built In Forest Comments
Like a cabin with branches and straws,
Shack is built by stranger moon in forest,
During full growth day moon will fall,
Silver appearance in shack will shine.
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Moon presented as a sage staying in a forest shack to reflect on life and God and also to read and write is indeed a sublime poetic fancy! A lovely poem, Kumaramani sir!
During full growth day moon will fall. God gives us wisdom and we feel his mercy. Swinging in his wisdom is our fortune. We love God very much. With love and hope we are growing with him. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.
A wonderful imaginative write on nature. Beautifully crafted write. Liked the third stanza.
My favorite lines: Image will dance in nearby pond in dream/Beauty of reflection in calmness will sing/ This is perfect place to meditate for moon/ In top secret wisdom will be practiced…This poem provides peace of mind and enriches our wisdom…Thanks dear sir for sharing!
Beauty of reflection in calmness will sing, thank you for sharing the poem with us
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7/18/2025 7:30:54 PM # 1.0.0
Shack is built for reading and writing and such shack is really wonderful. I loved this poem.