Shaam K Baad! (Urdu) Comments

(seh peher tk to zamaanay say mila kartay hen khud say hoti hay mulaaqat sada shaam k baad) bahut pasand aaya. Jaan e ghazal shair hai. But......

dil sar-e-shaam hi iss tarha sulag uthhta he jis tarha taaq pe jalti he shama shaam k baad wah wah...awesom poem

yeh to naadan say bachhay ki tarha rota hay mangta rehta he subho ki faza shaam k baad seh peher tk to zamaanay say mila kartay hen khud say hoti hay mulaaqat sada shaam k baad This is the best piece I have ever read in Urdu. All the verses have a complete thought in them. You are an amazing writer. You have reached heights. I really appreciate the the fascination you have in your words. Amazing write.

awsome......poem really touched my heart....nice creation

mujhko charhtay huay suraj ki tarha kafi hay --i specially love this line.Straightaway scolding of the sun and saying-Hey Sun or Aftab suno-your heat is not enough for me.The alliteration Shaam ke baad creates really a whirlwind.Lagta hain sham ke baad hi ishq ki shama jalegi. Sohne Sajjana Da Mehnga Bhaa Lagge Je Deve Dhokha Yaar Ohi Ek Pal Jeen Lyi Na Sah Labhe Has-Has Ke Jindgi Jeen Vala Ro-Ro Ke Maut Da Rah Labhe Thought well and scripted well.....i can only say after this sleep well..

why not in english about what happens after the evening?

Shaam k baad ki fiza rangin hoti hai, har koi talashta ek nai suraj har shaam k baad. itni herran n ho batool shaam k baad, ek nai subah aayegi har shaam k baad. xlent

i don't know chaste urdu but still i can understand the essence of the poetry, the poem is in beautiful form and it got beautiful flow.....i like the poem.