Shaam K Baad Ii (Urdu) Comments

ye poem. mery dil me utr gyi hy.

Sham ke baad beyond the dusk /memories of morning beyond the dusk, Where is the darkness beyond the dusk its a lovely poem

Sunder nazam likhi hai. Maa ke na hone par dukh ki abhivaykti/bayani ko aapne appni maa ke liye sunderta se kiya hai.

sad poem but enjoyed reading! the words 'shaam ke baad' is powerful

It's rich and beautiful! ! ! i call such poetry as SCRUMPTIOUS, delicious poetry as you can enjoy every bit of it. loved each and every line of this poem. You write with your HEART, your inner most feelings come forth. This poem is simply beautiful. you started with a beautiful thought. Unn ki yaadon ki jo hoti he sahar shaam k baad Hum ko lagta nahi taareek nagar shaam k baad The ending is sad but it's a true fact of life. jab laga kaam mukkammal huay saaray apnay baandh len ge kisi din rakht-e-safar shaam k baad Though the atmosphere in this poem is gloomy but the beauty of this poem has overpowered the gloom. i loved it! ! !

saaray apnay baandh len ge kisi din rakht-e-safar shaam k baad...yeap we will go or we have to go one day or another day, poignant poem with the intensity of emotions...well done ma'm

Har taraf dard chamakta he Pain shines in all directions like stars in the sky after the evening. Beautiful poem.