Flat damp alley with flickering neon tubes,
Entry by a door fashioned like a star,
The ice-buckets tinkle frozen cubes,
Ringlets of smoke curl in the café noir,
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Nothing like a tango to get us going! I love your preamble to the dance-the neon lights and star shaped door.Enjoyed it. Read my poem 'Charlotte' and see her dance!
hello sir! ! ! ! hey this is entertainment at it's best! ! ! ! ..don't know why many people haven't visited this one! ! ! ...... i enjoyed this one very one, great rhymes, alliteration! ! ! ! ! A+++ this one...this sorts of things helps to relax the mind! ! Regards shan
Good narrative verse here Ken - with humour too at the end - - an arousing verse too, so top marks for your careful wording....... Fay.
An awesome, evocative write