Most of the world
Have learned to despise
The words master and slave,
But many still endear
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The comments here show we are a bit like the blind men and the elephant. Is that the fault of the poem or the reader? I might add that good marriages are equal in partnership, not 'slave and master' and some of us worship a compassionate God. Raynette
Good write...if more people felt that way there might be less problems in relationships.
You sure know how to write poems that get people 'thinking' huh Uriah? Nice job. I like your stand on marriage and I agree with it. Being partners is the only way to make it work. (in my opinion) Sincerely, Mary