Thursday, July 16, 2009

Sexes Of The Utensils Comments

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Skin of tarnished silver,
Arched forehead and
Welcoming handle,
His teeth, Four prongs,
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Lazarus Knix 16 July 2009

No message. Just making the fork a male, and the spoon a female. Also, if you have criticism, please tell me WHY you have it, So I may fix the poem (if the concern is valid)

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Jahmari Thomas 16 July 2009

its a nice messgae that ur tryin to convey however its not fufilling its true potential!

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