A pleasure we do out of love for the other person
We our sharing the sexual experiment with
When the innocent become the intimate
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This was good poem. I like. Very good. Love it. I have addiction too. Love Coke.
Really an insightful piece of poetry written, a very interesting read.....
first of all i like to congratulate you for writing such a wonderful poem which deserves much more praises and much more compatible during these days of crisis. next poetry is the expression of soul. it does not bother for language or grammar.a poet pose his emotion alluring them with thoughts and wear the uniform of word. PH is not the final stage of any poem. certainly before giving it for final print you will need to discuss on so many aspect. overall a good concept n beautiful expression. go ahead n enrich the poetry world. may God bless you.10/10
Bare facts truthfully depicted. Cowards dare not try such confessions. Come what may you are a victor. This is maniacal tendencies of the sub-conscious. A syndrome for hyper active sexual urge. There are millions who undergoes such trauma every moment... And there is one School of Thought.. viz.the catharsis or the bliss you derive from the action is a sample/ replica of the rapture experienced in Heaven. A great poem undoubtedly true to the core.and also true portrayal of the mind...well done... cheers
I really enjoy reading this poem. It's amazing the way you expressed it.
like this poem.. you are picturing a reality. so many suffers like this and u brought it to limelight. thank u for sharing.
To F.J.R, ever heard of poetic license? A good poem pours forth from the heart like this one and doesn't need perfect spelling or grammar!
Becca, you have an imaginative mind, and i think the potential to hone that popetic element, and raise it to the next level. That said, and with all respectful genuine constructive criticism....Your spelling and grammar are either suffering from woeful deficiency or blatant laziness....Awriter cannot succeed if they cannot embrace the simplest of basic grammar. Poor spelling is a simple fix, called''Spellcheck'', or Webster's Dictionary. Read your contemporary Poet's, and practice writing simple free-verse in your spare time. Good Luck, young lady, and stop rigging your daily stats on this poem! FjR
wow i love this pome it makes me think of life keep it up
The only cure is finding the one you love with all of your heart. That's how it was with me.
I LOVE THIS POEM, IT REALLY HELPS ME THINK ABOUT MY 'FIX' WHICH IS SO HARD 2 LET GO! I ADMIRE ALL OF UR WORK, AN KEEP IT UP!
I saw the title and had to read this its so true, sadly. So many women(and men actually) find themselves in this place and a lot of them don't care they just keep doing it to 'get their fix' it is 'their acid'. And as a person who has been on the edges of this road I have seen what it means to just become addicted to it all, I realized it wasn't what i wanted and I was strong enough to move away and back to the right path, but the sad thing is so many people either aren't that strong, or don't want to be.
I traveled this road, and sometimes see it in the distance, not a happy place after a couple of miles.. great piece of work, thanks for sharing.
Please learn the difference between 'your' and 'you're', and 'our' and 'are', and other various words.
Nice idea but the psyche is quite difficult in the word. by the way its a good poem.
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Yes. Love it. Very good. Nice. My neighbour has addiction. His name David.