Tuesday, December 26, 2006

Severity Of Your Silence Comments

Rating: 4.8

Heat a rod red hot
press it into my eyes so hard.
Then with your lark voice,
you can very well ask
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Putholi Arumugham
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Evaughn Gray 28 June 2007

wow silence strikes with that heavy hand doesn't it...great work..~hazel!

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Malini Kadir 08 June 2007

well......silence hurts this much? real good! ....................or shall we say straight arrow to her heart!

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Dee Daffodil 24 February 2007

Wow...so beautifully written...I'm very impressed! Hugs, Dee

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Misty Talbot 26 December 2006

very poignant. I ve felt the pain of silence and you have captured it in your poem.

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