Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, August 28, 2009

Severe Jolt Comments

Rating: 5.0

You gave me jolt without any clue
Was all of sudden as if bolt from blue?
It was shot in bull but hook miscued
No escape route to go for and rescued
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Indani Narayan 09 October 2009

You gave me jolt without any clue Was all of sudden as if bolt from blue? It was shot in bull but hook miscued

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Sulochna Pandit 09 October 2009

Well it was not wise but your decision You might have thought over with precision Simple misgivings cannot take us further

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Raju Rajput 09 October 2009

You gave me jolt without any clue Was all of sudden as if bolt from blue?

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Maulin Shah 07 October 2009

What happens if one distrusts another? Who will help for feelings to smoother?

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Sagarika Shah 06 September 2009

What happens if one distrusts another? Who will help for feelings to smoother?

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Ravi Sathasivam 01 September 2009

Nice poem. Well penned Thanks for sharing with me

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Emotions I was hardly concealing I received your jolt...nice nice...10+++

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Kamli Kamal 29 August 2009

You gave me jolt without any clue Was all of sudden as if bolt from blue? ...10

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Radha Seth 29 August 2009

Dooms day in offing and can’t be far away Uncertainty will prevail and have its sway.......10

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Kashi Paul 29 August 2009

No escape route to go for and rescued...................ten

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Louis Rams 29 August 2009

there are times that we can not bury what we feel inside because then to yourself you lie.

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Umesh Lalvani 29 August 2009

it s so nice and enjoyable poem////////10

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Pami Panchal 29 August 2009

You gave preference to your feelings Under heavy pressure I was reeling Exerting pressure for final sealing....10

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Chetna Purohit 29 August 2009

It was shot in bull but hook miscued No escape route to go for and rescued.........10

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Lalvani Rekha 29 August 2009

Was it enough or steps mature? You thought the relations below stature........10

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Severina Dsouza 29 August 2009

Well it was not wise but your decision You might have thought over with precision...........10

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Nagesh Ratnavelu 29 August 2009

Under heavy pressure I was reeling Exerting pressure for final sealing................10

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Sunita Rao 29 August 2009

Nothing will go straight and right say Relation will strain and not pave the way...........10

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Venkat Ramanna 29 August 2009

Was it enough or steps mature? You thought the relations below stature.......10

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K.v. Subbarao 29 August 2009

Simple misgivings cannot take us further Relation can exist not any longer.............10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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