Severe Jolt Comments

You gave me jolt without any clue Was all of sudden as if bolt from blue? It was shot in bull but hook miscued

Well it was not wise but your decision You might have thought over with precision Simple misgivings cannot take us further

You gave me jolt without any clue Was all of sudden as if bolt from blue?

What happens if one distrusts another? Who will help for feelings to smoother?

What happens if one distrusts another? Who will help for feelings to smoother?

Nice poem. Well penned Thanks for sharing with me

Emotions I was hardly concealing I received your jolt...nice nice...10+++

You gave me jolt without any clue Was all of sudden as if bolt from blue? ...10

Dooms day in offing and can’t be far away Uncertainty will prevail and have its sway.......10

No escape route to go for and rescued...................ten

there are times that we can not bury what we feel inside because then to yourself you lie.

it s so nice and enjoyable poem////////10

You gave preference to your feelings Under heavy pressure I was reeling Exerting pressure for final sealing....10

It was shot in bull but hook miscued No escape route to go for and rescued.........10

Was it enough or steps mature? You thought the relations below stature........10

Well it was not wise but your decision You might have thought over with precision...........10

Under heavy pressure I was reeling Exerting pressure for final sealing................10

Nothing will go straight and right say Relation will strain and not pave the way...........10

Was it enough or steps mature? You thought the relations below stature.......10

Simple misgivings cannot take us further Relation can exist not any longer.............10