Thursday, September 7, 2017

Severe Fire Comments

Rating: 4.7

Fire can burn every thing
Except Mica or alike

Flame of fire is anguish of nature
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 07 June 2018

such a marvelous fiery poetry... can come only from the likes of thee..... you come after almost na year but see many still read ye... Share your vision and lovely poetry... with folks like me FIRE to extinguish all hate may become ye

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Susan Williams 02 June 2018

The fire of anger and bitterness is destructive to all it touches. There is fire in passionate pursuits but it needs to be tempered by selflessness or it too can turn destructive. Excellent write!

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Khairul Ahsan 22 May 2018

I also do agree with @Elena Sandu's comment that 'true creation comes mostly from hearts filled with love'. What a nice thought!

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Khairul Ahsan 22 May 2018

A poem of deep thought, of self realization. '...yet wrath of human power Is more severe to burn the creation But soul is defaced with its flame And victim is self the person, none other' - I fully agree.

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Unwritten Soul 22 December 2017

Creative way of pointing, i like the expression of your thought using fire as medium of translating concept and ideas..fire can burn sanity, and lets pour water to anybody that get angry....hope the fire gone and if not..it getting bigger hahahahahahaha..joking!

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Elena Sandu 28 September 2017

Is more severe to burn the creation How true, I could agree souls might be able to burn themselves when full of hate. I guess true creation comes mostly from hearts filled with love.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 September 2017

Flame of fire is anguish of nature and fire can burn anything. Anger is a vice and just like violent fire that destroys anythings and spoils status of humanity. Soul is immortal and to burn soul's sin fire of wisdom of spiritual nature is necessary. Wonderful comparative poem is shared here....10

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