Monday, October 3, 2005

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She passed him walking down the lane,
She looked his way, but all in vain,
He paid no heed, no turn of his head,
She was once his love, her heart now bled.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 26 August 2009

The pain of a broken relationship is always hard to bear. A brilliant poem as always Ernestine. Love, Andrew xx

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Duncan Wyllie 13 April 2006

A very sad place to be, I wouldn't wish this on anyone, It really hurts, you have shown such a powerful conection to the lost any lonely, Love Duncan

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Raynette Eitel 03 October 2005

Too sad, Ernestine. And endings are pure misery. Raynette

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