Sunday, February 2, 2014

Several Kisses Comments

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Her skin is soft like silk, black like the night.
Her dance is quiet, her dance is quick.
Her size is small, yet even the mightiest will fear her gaze.
Her tongue says no words, yet her actions speak loud.
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Gary Hembree
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Hazel Durham 06 September 2015

Superb write with great imagery and inspired lines!

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Noreen Carden 03 February 2014

At first i thought you were writing about a woman.I have to say i know nothing about snakes but this one sounds dangerous.Enjoyed the read well done nice poem with a great description of the snakes dance of death

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Khairul Ahsan 02 February 2014

My God! Got terribly scared.

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