Friday, March 9, 2018

Seventh Sense Comments

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I see something that I cannot see,
I smell a thing that I can't smell,
I listen to a voice I can't listen to,
I taste a flavor I cannot taste,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 March 2018

A highly imaginative piece well written. Sometimes if we explore the powers of our mind, we can see things we cannot see and comprehend things that are beyond comprehensible with respect to others. There are people that are gifted, have attributes that are extraordinary. Probably, in the next generations to come, by evolution, things would be a lot different compared with the present. Another thought provoking poem brilliantly penned 10

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Chris Embrick 10 March 2018

Nothing is impossible to the one who sees beyond the rainbow. Great poem A delight to ponder.

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Valsa George 10 March 2018

We do not know what will happen in course of time! Such possibilities of a man with extra human powers cannot be ruled out! Your words can become prophetic!

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Khalid Saifullah 10 March 2018

It may be a fantasy but we have seen all our fantasies become fact one day. A brilliant imagination.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 March 2018

Evolution has magical effect on life. This is really very wonderful. Let a million years pass. This does not matter because seed of seventh sense is sown. Things those are not visible are now visible. The smell previously which is not perceived is now perceived. A brilliant poem is excellently penned...10

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Excellent crafted poem Akhtar Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Nudershada Cabanes 09 March 2018

Wonderfully crafted Sir Akhtar. Imaginative poem birthed from your seventh sense: -) a 10 Nudershada

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