Monday, December 11, 2006

Seventeen Comments

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He had, as teenage boys will do
his arm around the girl named Sue.
For hours they went through the woods
and talked about the men in hoods,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Huh! ! ! I was doing a search on 'beneath my tree'.. to see if one of my poems was still posted (I never know what I have on these days) .. anyway... up you 'pop' again! ! ! well with 3636 on I suppose the odds are I could do a words search on anyting and you'd show up.. well maybe not 'anyting'.. I'd win that one... anyway... tis a good poem this one... about teenagers and hee hee.. all (of some of the tings they do) ! ! ! tis got the right bumpty, bump, poetic sing song to it..

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