Seven Years In Heaven Comments

nice poem sheikhi. why only seven years? live long in heaven

My voice is only thing That soars high So ill chatter Till the last moment I'm live liked these expressions very much

To get paradise My voice is only thing That soars high So ill chatter Till the last moment I'm live a wonderful poem..romantic but mixed with realistic approach..thats making me think that you are doing a great job and professionally writing good poetry..keep it on and never stop writing as they are enough inspiring ones..specially this poem is very sweet and heartfelt on..10/10

a definte ten.. you rock with the pen..

captivating title....equally captivating narration...sorrow is the broader theme in this write...and you present it nice, Shirin...10

A great write....enjoyed with heart's content. A 10.

poetry fly over woods to catch new heights.. when I heard an impulse, voice of an angel in mind so descended to that hill in the porch of love that day, in dark and depressing spell of time met her in cage, prisoned in black hard bars she did nothing but turned her head in right

I must say you are a giften writer... A very beautiful poem indeed... Thanks for sharing...10 +++

A beautiful poem, with love, longing and sadness its main ingredients. Some lines are wonderful.......10/10.

A truly beautiful depiction of love, excellent poem.

Dear shirin sheikhi, PLEASE TRY TO ARRANGE WORDS INA BEAUTI FULL WAY. THAT WILL MAKE MORE ATRACTIVE. POEM IS A BEST ONE LOVE DENNY ANDERSON

Or how can I take her in upper skies? With a waxy wings of innumberable sighs Good work.

A beautiful piece indeed.... a life longing thirst.. love it 10/10

the love story of nightingale from your heart, applause 10