Saturday, June 7, 2008

! ! Seven Strings! ! ! ! ! Comments

Rating: 3.6

For the time I live and for
the days on its count
remarkably, on a scenic ambience
I crave to harvest seven notes
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Rema Prasanaa
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Sarwar Chowdhury 17 August 2008

Yeah, this is a fine composition.......... a 10

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Raj Nandy 08 July 2008

Rema, are you aware that the pulsating melody from your veena blend with the rhythmic vibrations of the entire cosmos! ? Phythogoras first spoke of music of the spheres.Shakespear later immortalised the concept in his Merchant of Venice Act V.Now the latest String Theories are speaking about vibrations of nano strings in their effort to synthesise Quantum Theory with Relativity! The Veena strings & its music are for eternity! -Raj Nandy

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 June 2008

to play Veena is like having to sleep in mother's cuddle and she sings with divine melody

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Satheesan Rangorath 08 June 2008

Hi Rema Prasanna Your's is a well crafted poem with sweet rhythmic words. It goes to the heart of reader with the ease of a soulful music. good work greetings Satheesan rangorath

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rohit sapra 08 June 2008

This poem is really so unique since it reflects the strength of music and the vast knowledge you have in it. Anything which is creative can play such a vital role in shaping ones life and surely classical music has got a healing strength in it too which makes it most different from the rest.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 08 June 2008

an excellent composition of music and poetry.........

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Seema Chowdhury 07 June 2008

Rema excellent poem. well composed and expressed. really enjoyed.

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Rani Turton 07 June 2008

Rema, your music and poetry have sparked off more than seven dreams in me. Thank you for this lovely poem.

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~ Jon London ~ 07 June 2008

Like music to my ears, wonderful descriptive tones play gently along with every word. Beautiful piece.........'10' definitely best wishes Jon

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Kesav Easwaran 07 June 2008

As per Vedic Hindu mythology Goddess with ‘veena’ is Divine Music personified. For music to give heavenly feel it should have a composition rich in proper syllable counts notes expressive words and a select meter. In a similar way for a poem to rhyme ring around and sing onto ‘inner human’ it should adhere well to rules related to counts words and meter. This poem is rich in imaginative expressions. Congrats, Rema *10*

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