Thursday, November 21, 2013

Seven Seconds Of Everlasting Existence Comments

Rating: 4.9

We exist not because we are breathing,
We exist beyond external outward things,
We have differences in million ways.
We have trillion kind of Road of Lives in our planet
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Captain Herbert Poetry
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Etienne Charilaou 12 July 2017

Beauty is all ye need to know (Keats) Love is all ye need to be. :)

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Sonali Ganguly 16 May 2014

expression of thoughts, concept touched me

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Jonas Goncalves 08 May 2014

I totally love this poem! It's deep, reflexive and inspiring. The subject about existence is simple, but present.

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Helena Zen 06 May 2014

........broad and deep

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Vilma Gomez 04 May 2014

Every line, every words, every Stanzas are so BRILLIANT

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Jessica Hernandezdamian 25 April 2014

Its beautiful. Its very true.

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Vishal Sharma 24 April 2014

very impressive and wonderful write.....! ! !

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Shania K. Younce 23 April 2014

This is a poem of inspiration. A poem that leaves me wanting to read more. It is like this poem could be morphed into a whole book. Absolutely wonderful work. Bien!

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Lee Mack 06 December 2013

love is love is love is love is love is love is love

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Munashe Rupazo 05 December 2013

Love is greater than any anticipation, true that is......

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Hannah Dollison 04 December 2013

beautiful poem indeed

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Guy Dimitri Jagodinski 01 December 2013

Very nice and very true.

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Roseann Shawiak 01 December 2013

An unusual way of describing humanity's existence, but I like it. Thank you for your comment and inviting me to read your poetry, I appreciate it. RoseAnn

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Erika Wingo 30 November 2013

This is lovely... I absolutely agree with the message!

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P.k Freitas 29 November 2013

Oh wow! I so love this poem, elegantly composed and thought provoking as well.. Bravo poet.

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April Pearl 25 November 2013

I liked the comparisons..road of lives, veins of complexities, multitude of sands..nice..its good

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April Pearl 25 November 2013

I liked the comparisons..road of lives, veins of complexities, multitude of sands..nice..its good

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Mary Amrutha 24 November 2013

LOVE this poem... good work

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Micah Tayco 22 November 2013

Very beautiful and nice poem.

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