Saturday, April 14, 2007

Seven Oceans Of Pain! ! ! Comments

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Swimming across the first ocean, i met my friend-tears,
he has been living there all alone for now many years,
he keeps count of all the little tears that i have shed,
on every tear, her name is tagged and my future is read.
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Analou Pabalate 07 September 2007

yea love is not only happiness but sorrows and pain as well! what a great poem.!

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Leila K 14 April 2007

Beautifullly composed...one of the best poems i have read in a very long time...a lot of pain.....love LeilaXXXX

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Sean Godley 14 April 2007

I liked this a lot Kumar - great write, especially the idea of swimming seven oceans. Sean

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