A sick lust
Stretching past seas and cell phone receptions,
With sleepy-eyed wings of dreaming.
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love remains that far...yet you feel it this near...you express your anticipation and feelings wonderfully well in your superbly worded poem, Eric...the stanza lines commencing 'The number one export...' add a philosophical veil to this sad romantic poem...10
I agree with Kesav completely here Eric! your expressive style is outstanding....wishing you a safe journey, Tai