Thursday, November 27, 2008

Seven More Weeks Comments

Rating: 5.0

A sick lust
Stretching past seas and cell phone receptions,
With sleepy-eyed wings of dreaming.
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Eric Gibson
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Tai Chi Italy 05 December 2008

I agree with Kesav completely here Eric! your expressive style is outstanding....wishing you a safe journey, Tai

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Kesav Easwaran 01 December 2008

love remains that far...yet you feel it this near...you express your anticipation and feelings wonderfully well in your superbly worded poem, Eric...the stanza lines commencing 'The number one export...' add a philosophical veil to this sad romantic poem...10

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