Saturday, May 5, 2012

Seven Lies Comments

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Seven lies are under
The seven deadly sins.
It will throw your soul
On thousand sharp pins;
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Neela Nath Das
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Sylva Portoian 18 May 2012

Strong Feeling to write such creative words...! You hate lies... So every honest one do...!

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Yes, Nilakshi nath, you are 'absolutely' right! ! when our pure prism mind has its own function, 'it does not act before and it plays behind! ' I think our minds are covered by opaque ignorance and it may prevent us seeing the truth! !

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Sharad Juneja 09 May 2012

Nilakshi ur creations are creating Tsunami ..indeed very beautiful..loved it

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Hans Vr 08 May 2012

Thought provoking well written poem. So many crooks feed on the superstition of the people. Sometimes hard to understand why people are so easily lured by them Good work.

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Anush Gupta 06 May 2012

Nice piece of poetic work.Christan belief is here in this poem.

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