Tuesday, February 26, 2008

***seven Forty Sevened Ponds Comments

Rating: 2.8

Incidental footprints of your journey
Mirrored olives, blues and strings of white
So many caught in busied travel delight
Olive-d peace in reflection-ed stills
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Minds-Eye captivating, Debora....1 line less, an' u could 've made this a sonnet! Just the same, though...this is magnificent work accomplished! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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James B. Earley 27 February 2008

An exceptional work! Beautifully crafted. Those 'incidental footprints' so often remain as vivid memories from 30,000 feet. Thank you for sharing.

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There is something very, very captivating about this. Can't put my finger on it but someone else will! t x

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Debora Short

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