Tuesday, July 23, 2013

Settling Comments

Rating: 5.0

You took all the colours
From your rainbow,
And coloured me in happy.
I bathed in the new perspective you poured over me.
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Ruby Honeytip
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Valerie Dohren 04 August 2013

A beautiful love poem Ruby, very touching - love the closing lines.

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Aria Siren 01 August 2013

sigh....there is really nothing for me to say here except that I am enraptured with this poem! I love the lens you see the world in Ruby. My favourite line: Even though you would never be mine. The thought that you would stay never grew. and: It's just........ I can't breathe without you. Going on my favourites list right away.

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Khairul Ahsan 24 July 2013

This poem is a piece of gem! I know the memories of my love Will serve as a colourful umbrella It's just........ I can't breathe without you. A classic expression.

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