Oh dear powerful sun, hear
Where are you going dear
Are you going to disappear?
Or are you going to hide?
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Most of the people get up in the morn, look outside, the rising light of the sun, and most probably yawn. And you dear poet right a lovely paean in its praise.
Nothing equalise the beauty of nature, dramatic, gud share perfect 10
Good narration of sun. Perfect though not with your usual rhyming.
Nice penned, expressing the beauty and bewitching power of nature. Thanks for sharing.
Spreading rays whole day. For the beauty of life. Thanks for sharing.
Sun is slowly setting down. Whole day sun has given us rays. This poem is heart touching.