Sunday, March 20, 2016

Setting Down Where? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh dear powerful sun, hear
Where are you going dear
Are you going to disappear?
Or are you going to hide?
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Dogma Daniman 19 October 2020

Sun is slowly setting down. Whole day sun has given us rays. This poem is heart touching.

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 August 2019

Most of the people get up in the morn, look outside, the rising light of the sun, and most probably yawn. And you dear poet right a lovely paean in its praise.

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 31 March 2016

Nothing equalise the beauty of nature, dramatic, gud share perfect 10

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Good narration of sun. Perfect though not with your usual rhyming.

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Mohammad Ahmadizadeh 20 March 2016

Nice penned, expressing the beauty and bewitching power of nature. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 March 2016

Spreading rays whole day. For the beauty of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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