Here in our covert world
The story of you and I was written
We lie on its shimmering surface
Cherishing the limited time that was given
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this is a very moving poem of adulation beyond tragedy! this poem is touching my heart like magic, visualizing every scene that i wanted to cry. very effective!
Very well written, .. I can feel your emotions through the words used.. great vocabulary and rhyming again, ... Keep it up... Im always on your side... c: