Tuesday, June 2, 2009

Set The Sun But Please Not Her Comments

Rating: 5.0

Here in our covert world
The story of you and I was written
We lie on its shimmering surface
Cherishing the limited time that was given
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Lorena Lalen Cruz
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Nashy Lamen 10 June 2009

Very well written, .. I can feel your emotions through the words used.. great vocabulary and rhyming again, ... Keep it up... Im always on your side... c:

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Julia Pascual 06 June 2009

awww.... =(a very sad, yet touching poem.. i love it men! ! =)

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Smiley Hooker 04 June 2009

this is a very moving poem of adulation beyond tragedy! this poem is touching my heart like magic, visualizing every scene that i wanted to cry. very effective!

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