Set Me Free Comments

A great start with a nice poem, Anvita. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

good one. there was continuation in events going on. that was nice to see

The display of rhymes trips me.

The free spirit not bound by any reasons, just living whatever the moment holds for it. Really good write. Enjoyed reading...

very nice.liked it.keep inking.

keep it, you can do better, you do have a way with words, work on it

Glad to find something good to read in ph after a long time. Thanks for sharing..

good! ...it seems to be quality

and again I wish you may be hope to be in horizon of dream and set your soul be free The incessant desires Born in cage Yet denies To envisage the reason In each horizon

o, yes...i liked your name a lot...don't ask me the reason, ok? by the way, what does it mean...may i know?

set me free? who does it? there are no reasons for many things under the sun...smiling at the fragility of life needn't have any reason...we willingly allow ourselves to be put into cages...don't we?

such a beautiful piece. very inspiring and well written! my favorite part was the last stanza. 'Set me free, let me fly/Not the wind, yet alive' absolutely lovely :)

i like your poem, its quite expressive and also it makes me inspire to write a poem like that....im looking forward to your another poem...: -)

It's a nice poem that bridges the gap between desires and realities of life, like your name, Anvita. Keep your desires and dreams alive and keep writing. Best Wishes. Naseer

it is a poem which is appreciated at two levels, , its overtone and undertone match.it celebrates the freedom, one at personal level and another at creative level.thanx