Wednesday, February 21, 2018

Sestina:A Braid Of Girlhood Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I was a girl, a very little girl,
I wished to wear long hair in braid,
To have skirts sewn with golden thread,
Decorated and colorful with pearly beads,
...
Read full text

Perdita Young (Hanna Wang)
COMMENTS
Dr Dillip K Swain 06 March 2018

Lovely poem! Beautiful recollection of childhood memories! Liked the fourth stanza most! ......10

0 0 Reply
Perdita Young 21 February 2018

Key words used in each stanza: girl, braid, thread, beads, maids, Petite. Scheme: *abcdef / *faebdc / *cfdabe/ *ecbfad / *deacfb / *bdfeca / *fbc+eda

1 1 Reply
Close
Error Success