O, God
You give me sagacious sunshine
I give you my satiated smile
You give me a long day in the night
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A prayer with praises to God in a thankful pleasant way...of course commendable 10
You give me a long day in the night Your brightness in my sleep You give me a long night in the day lovely contrast GOD SMILES
God alone can give us rest in the night and bright sunshine in the day. He is the great Giver and we receive umpteen blessings from Him on a day to day basis! We can only pray not to withhold his blessings! A beautiful supplication to God......
A wonderful and heartfelt prayer. Nine lines that recognize the graces that God gave us and thankfulness for the blessings bestowed upon us. This is how we should pray. Beautifully crafted.
Positive thoughts! ! With a smile on your face. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A novel and unique way to pray and out of the ordinary, and a beautifully worded poem