Serpent roads, winding down
The side of a mountain, to flattened ground
Serpent roads, on flattened ground
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Great play on the serpent form and movement. Your poems have great new concepts in them. Keep writing your old and new poems are very intesting and lovely to read :)
Serpent roads, to the horizon line Vanishing completely, into the evening twine. The path of nature is like a serpent road, but so beautiful.