War is her first love,
And death is her mistress.
Sitting in fire and raping
What few flames dare to burn.
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Its really amazing. I like it. One of my novellet is called 'Maya Mistress' in that Death is appearing as mistress. I am voting '10'
I think I am a bit too naive to understand the full meaning of this poem.
Took a lot of reading behind the lines, of separating the images but I get this. It's tough but honest and we all have to put something back in to get it out. You are superb at metaphors.