Thursday, September 22, 2011

Serial Lover Comments

Rating: 5.0

War is her first love,
And death is her mistress. 
Sitting in fire and raping
What few flames dare to burn. 
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Stefanie Fontker
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Declan O Reilly 22 September 2011

Took a lot of reading behind the lines, of separating the images but I get this. It's tough but honest and we all have to put something back in to get it out. You are superb at metaphors.

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Sam Varghis 22 September 2011

Its really amazing. I like it. One of my novellet is called 'Maya Mistress' in that Death is appearing as mistress. I am voting '10'

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Hans Vr 22 September 2011

I think I am a bit too naive to understand the full meaning of this poem.

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