Serial Killer Documentary Comments

Dang, you should share this with Rob Zombie. Nicely done.

It's stupid they made you censor it. It was alot more raw and angry with the cuss words

people talk about this becoming a short story. but no. i see it becoming a play. which plays turn into movies as well. for instance, sweeney todd. a great tale of a 'butcher'... this is a great poem. a bit scary and intimidating..but very interesting.

Sorry bilal I would rather write poety on poemhunter than watch CSI maybe you could write cripts for a bbc tv crime show wot ever not for mine. Patrick

Very scary but great work. It would make a great short story.

A nice poetic narration seems like a short story with fine rhymes and alliteration and assonance of words...Scary and that makes it qualify as dark poetry but more fitting to be a short story....Great read i had...thx! ! !

I want my Mummy too, but she is dead. We had a slasher in our country years ago, and his wife worked with my Mother. At night he would lock all the doors for her saying, I don't want the slasher to get you! Mental sickness is rife, and I also think violence in the media accounts for much of the violence in society today. Your words were about horror and it worked well. Well done. 10 Karin Anderson

i'm scared. I want my mommy......................

more literature than poem... but that pays... have you tried to write short stories and get them published?

So when you.. have cut.. the last treat.. from the tree.. of innocence.. Does this.. beast.. go after.. roots of the tree...iip Do you have walmarts over there..? ... :)

The real drama unfolds the most punitive event a human could have commited.A gruelling images that will lay on human mind for a long time.Great piece Bilal.

oh! what a great horror story.you have brought it out nice that reader will be rather horified. voted10 surya

A very intresting and different poem, i loved it! 10+ from me!