Tuesday, July 31, 2012

Serenity Sobs Comments

Rating: 5.0

This poem is dedicated to you,
My love,
For so many things you don't understand,
So many nitigrities I have no power to explain.
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Peter Daniel Phiri
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Faith Pfumbidza 31 July 2012

YOU ARE A GREAT POET.the tone of this poem puts the reader in your shoes, you have really managed to put me in your emotional state.great indeed.i wish i could write like this

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Louis Cecile 31 July 2012

Great poem and the use of language plus tone moves at slow pace to pull at the emotions of the reader.

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