Friday, January 16, 2015

Serenity Of A Desert City Comments

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Feeling the wind brushing my face with wisps of long
hair, sun shining heatedly on my being, relaxing muscles
and easing tension.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 16 January 2015

When you mention the desert, generally it doesn't sound serenity or coolness or tranquility in the back of the listener's mind. Nevertheless, your lovely poem wonderfully turns that notion up side down. You say desert too can inspire a poet to do some thing creative. Excellent write. I enjoyed reading.

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