Thursday, June 15, 2006

Serenity Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sun peeks, moon sets
Scented evergreens sway softly
Hushed silence, muffled footsteps
An eagle calls from overhead
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Jacquie StewartHeimann
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John Tiong Chunghoo 15 June 2006

painting very simple poetry for children.

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Sonny Rainshine 15 June 2006

Gentle, pastoral scene. Effective word-picture.

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