Tuesday, March 31, 2009

Serenity Comments

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As gentle as a newly blossomed flower, flowing with the breeze. The feeling of joy from you, I perceive, ceases all things. The tenderness of your lips arouse my mind sensually to a point where it could break, knowing that you could take

me to my wildering desires, where you set fire to my soul and mind. In turn baby I want to deliver you from reality to a place totally enchanted, full of love and tranquility, rarely inhabited by man, fresh and a newed land--Serenity
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Jeronica Alston
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~ Jon London ~ 01 April 2009

Beautiful imagery, you paint very well with chosen words that flow gently. Nicely done

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Jeronica Alston

Jeronica Alston

Warren County, North Carolina
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