Serenity Comments

VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM on Serenity! Serenity....When the wind is gone..mountain summit....Tranquility at seas....comes death There is peace indeed...rest in serenity... all these is the sum and substance. Voted 10+

Serenity, everyone seeks it, and I enjoyed your poem, Noel. I liked your A-B-C-A rhyme scheme too.

The world should not be polluted and contaminated by some countries and people's greed because; When air is lost You and I can’t breath Then becomes ghosts And all is lost Beautiful but worrisome poem.........10/10. Best Wishes Naseer

I truly agree with Shy[ana] on this one. I love the style you have. Please take the time to read my poem, Stop Time, I think we have a mutual understanding on the topic, though a slightly different deliverance. .Char.

I really like this poem. It has a certain flow to it and an interesting pattern of rhyme and repetition. The meaning of it is also very unique and grasping. a fine piece of work in my opinion. =] ~Shyana K~<3 ps- ive been studying a lot of different varieties of poems to work on my flow. thanks again