Saturday, November 1, 2008

Serenity Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lying at the top, in the dead of the night,
Admiring life, and beholding the sight,
Gazing above, beyond the sparkling low sky,
Envying the stars, floating so high.
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Kanishk Gupta
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Swetha Vanakayalapati 11 June 2012

The howling wind, concealing some crime, The rustling leaves, battling against time, The hovering moon, behind the silver line, Welcoming the spirits, and raising mine. a finite description

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Nia Riz 01 November 2008

another beautiful composition....the last four lines are the best...

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