Serenity Comments

What a beautiful word you use as a title first of all Bob. - and your words seem to imbibe the flowing of water so potently that we are carried with you on into your own serenity. Thank you - a lovely piece.10 from Fay.

I love this kind of poem, a thoughtful look at nature which can only bring on a day of peace. Bob

rare to see such a long stream of couplets that flow so easily from one to the next... Really does give a feel of serenity... I want to be in this place that dreams must be made of!

serenity.. a safest place, in this disturbed world..... the words are singing, a fine piece sir...