Friday, April 22, 2016

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Mulberry tree is broadly known
By its fruits galore sour or sweet
Men yearn for cool in earth zones
Birds too pick more during tweet
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Kassem Oude
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Lorraine Colon 23 April 2016

This is an interesting poem. You show the reader the good and bad aspects of the mulberry tree. If given a chance to grow and mature, it just might surprise us pleasantly. After all, every living thing, including human beings, has good and bad characteristics. Time, and a bit of tolerance on our part are all that are necessary for each living thing to grow to its full potential. Every living thing deserves a chance. There is a lesson to be learned from this. Well written, Kassem.

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