Tuesday, May 16, 2006

Seraphim Comments

Rating: 5.0

Seraphim of twilight time
drawing through the veil of shadows
whisper tales of love sublime
and what becomes of future morrows
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Charles M Moore
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Linda Ori 21 May 2006

Beautiful piece! Reminds me of my 'Prayer for Change'. Such a wonderful picture you portray - Love and peace for the world, in the embrace of an angel. Simply brilliant, and lovely flow. Linda

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Duncan Wyllie 20 May 2006

This reminds me of a hummingbird whose colours are so graceful as they flit through our mind Brilliant! ! ! Love Duncan X

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Esther Leclerc 18 May 2006

Beautiful, Charles... A gentle rhythm in a poem of quiet grace... I love it.

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trisha evensen 16 May 2006

this is simply awesome peace and love Trisha

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Adryan Barnathan 16 May 2006

Patricia, you are right...there is an ''other worldliness'' to this poem. This is wonderful Charles~ xxxxA.

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Patricia Gale 16 May 2006

Wonderful, such divine words.Captivating the readers mind.Well done, I did enjoy. Patricia Gale

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Charles M Moore

Charles M Moore

Glasgow Scotland.
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