Friday, August 28, 2020

Sequoia Comments

Rating: 4.9

Massive your roots
sunk underground
where all at last anchor
to re-berth with their ancestors; trunk
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Nastasimir Franovic 30 May 2023

The power of nature. The trees which witness the times pass by. The roots, our ties to our ancestors. Thank you for a wonderful poem!

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Poetic Sky 29 May 2023

Lovely poem. Nicely written.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 April 2023

CONGRATULATIONS, DEAR YOONOSS, your poem is ranked as number 15, you are quite a very long time on this Best Member Poems Status, since you have not submitted a new poem anymore. But my CONGRATS are sincere, right from my heart.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 November 2022

A great poem dear poet. Loved it. Top score

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Martin Greyford 23 June 2022

it keeps me thinking how can such tall big giant trees ever exist in my era? i realise God wanted me to see where they are getting of skycrapers

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Second visit: Gaint sequoias making themselves a monument in tree...awesome

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Leloudia Migdali 21 March 2021

An ode to this awesome tree! I loved it!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 16 November 2020

Wow an impressive poem on the giant sequoia tree, you described and mused wonderfully. Kudos! Plz pleez do read my newest poem titled, " babies cry anywhere"

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A meaningful poem so wisely written...top star

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Ellen Ni Bheachain 13 September 2020

So very professionally written and eloquently said.

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Nkosilathi Zinyane 11 September 2020

This is an excellent hand. A well penned piece. i couldn't say more except that you write so well.

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Louis Rams 05 September 2020

from it s birth underground to the heavens where it can be found very well expressed

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Mj Lemon 04 September 2020

Just one living thing...and yet it can outlast entire civilizations. Great verse, Yoonoos.

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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 02 September 2020

nicely written......ten out of ten

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Yewande Adedokun 02 September 2020

I like the quality depicted and the personification of the " tree" ? as well as the desire for the immortality it enjoys for yourself. Good job!

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Haile Tesfaye 02 September 2020

A well crafted Poem with a profound use of metaphor.

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Benjamin Uy 02 September 2020

Kind of a monumental poem By a mature poet

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Sandra Josefsson 01 September 2020

" As I sense my essence telepathically" We can compare ourselves to trees because we also have roots and are forever growing as our branches reach to heaven. Lovely poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 September 2020

A great tribute to a one of a kind tree that expresses in brilliant detail its wonderful attributes. The superb imagery made me at close range with Sequoia. A poetic gem, informative and with a meaningful message to humanity. Liked the ultimate stanza To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 September 2020

Another masterpiece that speaks of the great and brilliant Poet's unique ability to express beautifully and paint vividly and magnificently his theme that will linger in the mind and heart of his readers.

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