Massive your roots
sunk underground
where all at last anchor
to re-berth with their ancestors; trunk
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CONGRATULATIONS, DEAR YOONOSS, your poem is ranked as number 15, you are quite a very long time on this Best Member Poems Status, since you have not submitted a new poem anymore. But my CONGRATS are sincere, right from my heart.
it keeps me thinking how can such tall big giant trees ever exist in my era? i realise God wanted me to see where they are getting of skycrapers
Second visit: Gaint sequoias making themselves a monument in tree...awesome
Wow an impressive poem on the giant sequoia tree, you described and mused wonderfully. Kudos! Plz pleez do read my newest poem titled, " babies cry anywhere"
A meaningful poem so wisely written...top star
This is an excellent hand. A well penned piece. i couldn't say more except that you write so well.
from it s birth underground to the heavens where it can be found very well expressed
Just one living thing...and yet it can outlast entire civilizations. Great verse, Yoonoos.
I like the quality depicted and the personification of the " tree" ? as well as the desire for the immortality it enjoys for yourself. Good job!
" As I sense my essence telepathically" We can compare ourselves to trees because we also have roots and are forever growing as our branches reach to heaven. Lovely poem.
A great tribute to a one of a kind tree that expresses in brilliant detail its wonderful attributes. The superb imagery made me at close range with Sequoia. A poetic gem, informative and with a meaningful message to humanity. Liked the ultimate stanza To my Poem List.
Another masterpiece that speaks of the great and brilliant Poet's unique ability to express beautifully and paint vividly and magnificently his theme that will linger in the mind and heart of his readers.
The power of nature. The trees which witness the times pass by. The roots, our ties to our ancestors. Thank you for a wonderful poem!