Sequel To My Poem 'Passion: A Bite Or Two'..... Comments

A Romantic write! My favorite lines: She seemed to show no interest in dining, but just to sit and smile/BUT.....bit by bit, and bite by bite, she ate quite a lot......after a while/And shared the wine as well, and then they both had brandy/She also used her toes to prod him under the table, making him quite randy……………………..Dillip

PH insists on putting the words but she at the end of the 3rd line instead of where i want them, at the start of the 4th line. i guess i left the quotation mark off after 'college day' near the end, but i have no time now to correct it! ! ! !