Monday, November 5, 2018

Sepulchre Comments

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Her eyes are like a sepulchre gently calling me,
They invite me to stay for all eternity...
Locked behind a door from which no soul escapes:
The lowliest of dungeons within Hell's estates.
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Brett White
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Dr Antony Theodore 11 November 2018

Locked behind a door from which no soul escapes: The lowliest of dungeons within 's estates. So I choose instead to quietly walk away, ..love, , mercy, acceptance, cared.for....Through adversity we grow........ so very true my dear poet. Brett. thank u for your poems. tony

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Practicing Poetess 05 November 2018

'Through adversity we wilt or we grow' - - - - How true! This poem gives us all something to think about; a little nudge toward self-examination.

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Dave Walker 05 November 2018

We all need faith and in that faith comes strength. A great poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 November 2018

A beautiful poem. Very inspiring. Well crafted and executed write.10

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