Thursday, September 20, 2018

September Sun Comments

Rating: 5.0

The September sun
plays hide and seek
Peek-a-boo, peek-a-boo
with the gloomy clouds
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Philo Yan
COMMENTS
Hans Vr 22 September 2018

The playful tone of the poem, the topic and the choice of words makes the poem truly enjoyable. Well written!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 September 2018

A beautiful poem depicting September sun. Great imagery and well crafted write. Liked the picture that goes with the poem. It enhanced the beauty of this write.10

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