Sunday, August 23, 2015

September Song Comments

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September is here.
The sky is bright and clear.
Corn is ripening, thick and brown.
Apples are falling to the ground.
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Alesia Leach
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Jessica Nichols 21 July 2018

Well done! I like this :)

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Trinity Baldwin 21 July 2018

What a wonderful rhyme Alesia you are spot on with the imagery....

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 August 2015

So nicely and aptly presented the poem with amusing depiction of Nature in the month of September. Favourite lines are.....Leaves rustle in the breeze. Color begins to fade from the trees. Soon the children will start school. While the morning is heavy with dew. Thanks for sharing such beautiful poem.......10

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 28 August 2015

Wow harvest moon, what wondrful imagery throughout! Kudos for the meter and nature scenes. Great to read u again.

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Valsa George 26 August 2015

Lovely picture of the surroundings in the month of September and the changes in Nature in the cusp between Summer and Autumn! Here in my part of the country, September is the season of harvest!

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 24 August 2015

Truly, a poem on nature recollecting the days of Keats and Wordsworth. Loved reading the poem.

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