Tuesday, September 23, 2014

September Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Somber wind flows through
A slow September evening
it comes as the drifted
Clouds on poet's old window
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Musfiq us shaleheen
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Soulful Heart 29 September 2014

in one word....sublime.....the crystal chips have pierced the senses and the awe breathing steam has etched an ethereal mist of wonder....simply awesome

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Md Asadullah 28 September 2014

A lovely poem having vivid imagery1, though in my country September rains brings in flood and havoc, Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem musfiq bhai :)

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Heather Wilkins 24 September 2014

a beautiful poem full of good imagery I like the title fits the poem lovely

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Sallam Yassin 24 September 2014

September rain at a narrow strip Isthmus between ride of summer and raid of fall / so sweet the colors in canvas of paint

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 September 2014

A nice description of equinox..arrival of autumn the September rain in fact departing lovely poem Bhai 10

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Akhtar Jawad 24 September 2014

A nice description of rains, loved this poem.

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Musfiq us shaleheen

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