Saturday, December 8, 2007

September Rain Comments

Rating: 4.9

Watching the day disappear,
The restless rain does fall,
Upon the ground,
Reflecting the night of the city,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Ernestine Northover 24 March 2008

Lovely, I can picture it all, most unpleasant place to be. Very well described and a pleasure to read Andrew. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 18 March 2008

The cold dark outlook of a september day, All the best Andrew Love duncan X

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Fred Babbin 08 December 2007

You do get the feeling of bleakness across.

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Thad Wilk 08 December 2007

Andrew, very good write, the descriptive phrases make you feel September Rain! *10*! Thad

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