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Through bars of engine roars, a tiny chirp;
The early breath of day, slowly haled within usurp;
Even more than a physical hunger have we,
Poets to sate the inner gnawings become thee;
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I really like how descriptive this is, and just how you say and put your words.
Very well done Gillena. You've utilized lots of fresh language and rhymes. Keep up the fine work. Best regards, Trade.
wonderful poetry.. nice.. you got words that are not in my vocab to make the rhymes perfect! nice poem
This poem feels like it has a slow power building up. I liked the line, 'Of experiences drafted like a Milky Way trundle, ' because it's so original and different. I like the way you pour out yourself into a poem and everything else disappears for a brief time.
A really wonderful poem in all aspects... I will try to follow your nice poetry from now and on... wael karameh karameh.
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7/22/2025 7:30:09 PM # 1.0.0
A very fine poem with lots of vivid imagery and the word blend seamlessly, well done.