September Comments

TWO: .how could it be otherwise? In a poem of course! My hats off to this wonderful poem in all its metaphors.5 Full Stars, your poems are always a pleasure to read, dear Poetess

ONE: your poem tells me the current state of your living area, because i take the view that a poet perceives things around her and takes in the extremes and processes it into a..

A one of a kind description of summer. A poem embellished with metaphors and compelling images. Beautifully crafted.

Wow! I have never read a more powerful description of the lingering heat of summer crushing the spirit of a city and its heat-hammered inhabitants====outstanding work---deserving a thousand stars

You must be investing time in making of a poem which is the sign of an artist. Proceed in this great way. All the best

I sincerely appreciate the way you use simile, metaphor and other poetic devices.

Magnificent. I would fail in my duty if i couldn't put a remark on this poem.

Summer has persisted here into September also, with temperatures today of 103 degrees Fahrenheit, a record for this date in this place.

Excellent poem! Well done x Many thanks for sharing.

Great Poem! Filled with truth, strong images, love and compassion. Marvelous!

This poem is just wonderful