Saturday, September 30, 2006

September Comments

Rating: 5.0

Brilliant blue splattered
With crayola colored leaves -
Wind blown and tattered.
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Linda Ori
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Daniel Kempson 13 August 2009

This is September in verse Linda so well said 10 Daniel

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Rusty Daily 30 September 2006

From one who works outside...there is much more here than meets the eye. Very nice.

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Debora Short 30 September 2006

Lovely Lin-ku! Fall imagery is indeed, crayola-ed beautifully. Nice write!

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Francesca Johnson 30 September 2006

'Crayola coloured leaves' - nice! I liked the whole poem, Linda. Love, Fran xx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 30 September 2006

MIDNIGHT...A Harvest 'KU...An Autumn pleasure & with a creative mix of Zen/Traditional & Modified /Contemporary Haiku...A fine job, Midnight! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Goldy Locks 30 September 2006

heyay! i like it. nicely portrayed September haikus.

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