What is you wish to tell us dear earth
Why are you jumping, shaking angry,
What is your aim, why have you us, the people, hurt?
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Great poetry, Elena Sandu. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks
ADDITION: Thank you so much for sharing this brilliant and thought-provoking poem I am happy to know that you are publishing your poems here, Elena. Sent with caring love, Pipi / Sylvie.
SECOND PART: You wrote a fascinating but tragic story-poem. Hats off for you, dear Elena. I like all your thought-provoking poems. A 10+++++++++++++++++ for the PH vote. Smile, Love and Happiness always Your poet friend, Sylvia Frances Chan
FIRST PART: Eerie is that when the earth shakes so hard that there are so many victims. Excellently worded, Elena, I so understand every word you wrote here, metaphors or in reality. They have the same results in people's hearts. First Sapporo near you, then Palu, near the island Java where I was born, now Palu does not exist anymore, on the peninsula of Sulawesi, Indonesia.
Earthquakes are nothing but my tremors Of huge pain.Taifun is my scared breathe And rains, tears for mercy, poured in vain. The humans have no eyes to see, no heart to feel, no ears to hear, no mind for future dreams.......nice poetic expression. The cause of earthquake has been nicely inscribed. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.
Earthquakes, heavy rains and storms are the ways Earth expresses its pain! Great concept!
'Earthquakes are nothing but my tremors Of huge pain.Taifun is my scared breathe And rains, tears for mercy, poured in vain.' - Words of a kind, compassionate mind.