Monday, September 10, 2018

Sept 2018, Sapporo Comments

Rating: 4.7

What is you wish to tell us dear earth
Why are you jumping, shaking angry,
What is your aim, why have you us, the people, hurt?
...
Read full text

Elena Sandu
COMMENTS
Khairul Ahsan 11 June 2020

'Earthquakes are nothing but my tremors Of huge pain.Taifun is my scared breathe And rains, tears for mercy, poured in vain.' - Words of a kind, compassionate mind.

0 0 Reply
Jazib Kamalvi 12 December 2018

Great poetry, Elena Sandu. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks

1 0 Reply
Sylvia Frances Chan 30 October 2018

ADDITION: Thank you so much for sharing this brilliant and thought-provoking poem I am happy to know that you are publishing your poems here, Elena. Sent with caring love, Pipi / Sylvie.

1 0 Reply
Sylvia Frances Chan 30 October 2018

SECOND PART: You wrote a fascinating but tragic story-poem. Hats off for you, dear Elena. I like all your thought-provoking poems. A 10+++++++++++++++++ for the PH vote. Smile, Love and Happiness always Your poet friend, Sylvia Frances Chan

1 0 Reply
Sylvia Frances Chan 30 October 2018

FIRST PART: Eerie is that when the earth shakes so hard that there are so many victims. Excellently worded, Elena, I so understand every word you wrote here, metaphors or in reality. They have the same results in people's hearts. First Sapporo near you, then Palu, near the island Java where I was born, now Palu does not exist anymore, on the peninsula of Sulawesi, Indonesia.

1 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 18 October 2018

Earthquakes are nothing but my tremors Of huge pain.Taifun is my scared breathe And rains, tears for mercy, poured in vain. The humans have no eyes to see, no heart to feel, no ears to hear, no mind for future dreams.......nice poetic expression. The cause of earthquake has been nicely inscribed. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.

1 0 Reply
Me Poet Yeps Poet 13 September 2018

painful to hear did u suffer

1 0 Reply
Kostas Lagos 12 September 2018

Earthquakes, heavy rains and storms are the ways Earth expresses its pain! Great concept!

1 0 Reply
Bernard F. Asuncion 11 September 2018

Elena, such an excellent write.....................

1 0 Reply
Close
Error Success